Wednesday 5 July 2017

The Black Hat

There was a little boy who lived in a forest in an old house. The boy walked in the forest. He saw a hat. He walked to where it was.

He decided to take it home. The boy loved it. He took it to bed and when he went to bed he saw colourful birds. When he saw it he trapped them all.


But one of the birds escaped the cage. The boy went and looked for it. It didn’t come back, only the normal birds. He was sad. Then he found the lost bird. He said, “Come down I want you.” But it did not come down. So he walked home. 

5 comments:

  1. Well done Cruz .

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  2. REALLY! nice story just maybe make it a little bit longer if so

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  3. Nice Writing Cruz :D

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  4. Put more adjectives or similes.

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