Wednesday 5 July 2017

The Red Hat

CHARACTERS:
Danny (bro)
Aunt Larra
Whiskers (cat)
Amy (sis)

There once was a little boy named Danny who lived with his Aunt, a cat named Whiskers, and his sis named Amy. He couldn't talk with his Aunt because she was deaf, only sign language worked. One day Danny took a very long walk then… he found a hat!  Danny took that hat home. It wasn't a fancy hat; it was just red like cherries.

After a while, when Danny left the hat in his room to go for a walk… Amy sneaked in Danny’s room then took that hat! She was surprised what she saw; beautiful birds flying out of the hat!

Amy trapped the beautiful birds in cages. Then she put the cages in her room. BUT she left the hat in Danny’s room. When Whiskers noticed she felt evil! So she sneaked the cages outside. She unleashed some birds, then put the cages back into Amy's room.

The very next day Danny looked at the hat.  He felt like someone had touched the hat! THEN Danny realised something… a finger mark of… Amy’s fingers! He knew that Amy had touched that hat! He saw beautiful birds fly out of the hat. He wanted the birds to go!

When Amy went in her room… she saw no birds! Danny trapped the birds right next to a volcano!  “It's like a mouse sneaked them AND stole them!” thought Amy.


Amy! Danny! Get your shoes on! We are going to be late!” the old lady called. Amy knew her brother hid the birds, because he was always stealing her stuff! So she hid the hat which made Danny sad because he thought he had treasure. Nobody ever heard about that hat or the birds ever again. THE END!

5 comments:

  1. I love the way you have used a good simile at the start of your story. T.D

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  2. I love the way you have used a good simile at the start of your story. T.D

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  3. Nice one! It's really great! From Lucy

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