Nearly
every year thousands of different animals from around the world have been taken
from their homes to perform at circuses. It may sound like fun performing but
who knows what they do behind the scenes? Maybe the animals get whipped or
tortured for doing the trick wrong.
The animals live a sad unusual life while
they are forced to do what the leader says. When they are performing, the
animals get boos and laughs. Imagine living your life as one of the animals
getting humiliated and tortured. I sure would not want that.
I believe that the animals in circuses don't
get fed properly and are not treated well. If you want animals to entertain
people, send them to the zoo so the animals are happy and the people are
entertained.
Every night the animals are locked up in
their cages. I bet the animals couldn't even move because the cages are too
small.
Dunedin and Wellington City Councils have
local bans on the use of wild animals in circuses. Austria, Costa Rica, Hungary, Finland, India,
Israel, Singapore and most recently China
have banned the use of wild circus animals, while Denmark, Sweden,
Finland, and the Czech Republic have limited the use of certain species.
I bet that the animals want to go back to
their natural habitat and be reunited with their family. So do you want this to
continue? I sure wouldn't so LET'S
MAKE A CHANGE AND LET THE ANIMALS HAVE
FREEDOM!
References
https://thesolution.org.nz/2011/02/09/circus-animal-bans/
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you have referenced where you got your research from because then other people will be able to learn more about not keeping animals in circuses. T.D
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