Sunday 10 September 2017

Narrative Success Criteria
The first sentence has hooked the readers interest:
·       Used a sound effect.
·       Described a character’s thoughts or feelings.
·       Used dialogue
·       Jumped right into the action.
Each new event is organised into a new paragraph
Used a variety of sentence beginnings
Used speech marks to show when someone is talking
Writing has been proof read carefully, and punctuation, spelling and grammar has been checked and corrected.
The story is exciting and holds the readers interest!

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