"But that’s not fair” cried
Chardonae. “Yes it is,” replied mum. “Your
brother did the dishes yesterday so you have to do them today.” “Fine,” moaned
Chardonae. Chardonae walked so unenthusiastically to the kitchen, that someone
could have easily mistaken her for a zombie. As she opened the kitchen door,
her jaw dropped. There were mountains of dishes piled all over the place.
Chardonae was so surprised, all the dishes could even fit in the kitchen.
Then,
Chardonae had a fabulous idea. She would make a dish washing robot, so that she
wouldn’t have to do any work and she could enjoy her time at the beach with her
friends. She wouldn’t even have to supervise it. Chardonae quickly gathered all
the cleaning products she could find in the house and she chucked them in
garage. Then, she grabbed an old toothbrush, a toilet cleaner, mums old laptop,
and some old car parts. She put all her equipment together and after a while,
it made a dishwashing robot. It squeaked and beeped, then it stood up and said
“I am dishwasher 300. Where are the dishes?” “They’re in the kitchen,” answered
Chardonae. “Okay,” said the dishwasher in a loud robotic voice.
It walked
slowly and stiffly into the kitchen and started cleaning the dishes in seconds!
“Finally” sighed Chardonae. She quickly gathered her beach things together and
got into the car. “Mum!” screamed Chardonae, “I’m done”. “Okay” replied mum. “I’m
coming.” Mum entered the car and asked “Where to?” “Um, to the beach,” answered
Chardonae.
As they arrived, she looked out the window and saw all her friends just chilling on the
warm beach sand “Yes” screamed Chardonae. “They’re still here”. Chardonae
leaped out of the car and sprinted towards her friends. But when she got there
she realised the girls on the beach weren't actually her friends but they were
just really short teenagers. “No!” wailed Chardonae “They were supposed to wait
for me.” Chardonae sprinted as fast as she could back to the car and screamed. “Mum!” The car had already driven away.
Chardonae
started panicking, her heart was beating so fast she was sure it would pop out
any second soon. Suddenly, Chardonae noticed something shining in the sand, it
was bright green cell phone. “Wow” exclaimed Chardonae “I’m so lucky”. She
quickly dialled her mums number and said “Mum can you please come back and pick
me up, I just realised it wasn’t my friends on the beach. It was just these
tiny teenagers” “Ok” said mum “I’m on my way”.
When mum
arrived Chardonae hopped in the car and didn’t say a word. She was feeling
quite embarrassed. When the car stopped at Chardonae’s house, Chardonae ran
inside and found all the dishes were clean and were back in the draws and
cupboards. “Wow, it actually worked” exclaimed Chardonae.
“Wait a minute,
where’s the robot.” Chardonae heard a faint robot voice saying “Where are the
dishes.?” “ Oh no” said Chardonae. She ran all around the house but the robot
was nowhere to be found. Chardonae sprinted as fast as she could outside. In
the distance she could see a black silhouette moving in and out of the other
houses. “This is bad, this is really bad.” Chardonae quickly rushed to the other houses and said “I am so sorry my
robot just got completely out of control.” “Oh no,” said the people in the house. “The robot did a fantastic job!”
The people
in the house showered her with money. The other houses in the neighbourhood did
the same. From that day on Chardonae never had to do the dishes again and, she
became a millionaire.
Nice Work Davina I love the way you have detailed and described what your dish washing robot was like!!
ReplyDeleteNice Work Davina like how you described the story M.F .
ReplyDeleteNice work I loved all your described writing and all your different sentence beginners .
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