Wow! It was a delightful, sunny, Saturday morning. A girl called Maria was getting ready to go to Australia with Trinity her best friend.
Maria hated vacuuming the house. She was thinking about inventions she could make so that she didn’t have to do the job. She started striding out the door and as she slammed it behind her, she could hear her mum calling her back inside. Her mum called her into the lounge and said, “Vacuum the house please for some pocket money.” Maria was broke so she needed to do it for some money.
She had a family vacation to go to but there was no other way she could get there because she had no money. She decided she would do the chores but then she thought in her mind about what she could do so she didn’t have to do it. But her mind was soooo blank....
She hated vacuuming so much that she then decided to use her time up to make an electric robot to do the vacuuming for her. When she could be in Australia in the shed building a gigantic fort to sleep in for the night.
At that moment she had nearly finished making her robot. She used 4 steak knives, a blender, laser torch, bobie pins and batteries. She tried to turn it on but it was not working. She placed it on the ground and then let it go. It then cut out. Oh no! there is something wrong so she took all the parts apart and then built it from scratch.
It was ready to go, she took it into the lounge and powered it on, with all her strength she let it go and watched it suck up all the dirt, crumbs and mess squishing in the carpet. She was thinking about all the time it would take to vacuum the house without having a helpful, fantastic robot to clean for her.
It was becoming night as she was amazed and happy that her invention worked. She put her robot beside her and then layed down with her head sinking into the warm pillow. She snuggled up tight to the blanket and then drifted of to sleep.
It became morning and she was amazed at the sight that laid before her eyes, waking up to rainbows surrounding her. She was wandering what was going on but she couldn’t tell because it was so sunny that every time she glanced around she would get blurred in the eye from the sun and she could not see properly.
Later on she was able to go to Australia so she packed up all her things and got dropped of at the airport. 3 hours later she landed in Awesome, Amazing Australia. She rambled passed the crowd and finally she was at her Aunty Shayla’s house having the funnest time in her life.
Unfortunately Maria needed to go out so she got her things together and then drove to the beach, she did fun things like , running in the sand, swimming in the water, building sandcastles and sunbathing in the terrific sun.
By now she was tired after such a long day, as it was time to go home and rest up. Her surprise was so good. She had the best day ever thinking what it would be like if she was back in her country being bored!!!
Your writing is good good job from Harleen
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