Monday, 14 August 2017

NO LOLLIES AT SCHOOL!

I believe that children shouldn’t take lollies to school.

First of all, lolly wrappers can make your school's environment into a big mess and it can make a very hard job for the care takers. Also, if it is a very windy day, the wrappers can be blown to small places like under the classrooms or to drains.

Also, you might know that you can get a very bad sickness which is called diabetes from lollies. They have lots of sugar and other things that can make you get diabetes. Diabetes is a lifelong disease that affects the way your body handles glucose, a kind of sugar, in your blood.

If you are eating too many lollies you can break or crack your shiny teeth. You might also know that it can make your teeth rotten and they might fall out. Then one day it might be hard to eat strong food like apples.


Now you know what happens if you eat too much lollies. Therefore, children should never take lollies to school.

2 comments:

  1. I agree with your argument! You have explained your reasons clearly and supported them with relevant details.

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  2. I agree! NO LOLLIES AT SCHOOL!

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