I believe that children shouldn’t take
lollies to school.
First of all, lolly wrappers can make your
school's environment into a big mess and it can make a very hard job for the
care takers. Also, if it is a very windy day, the wrappers can be blown to
small places like under the classrooms or to drains.
Also, you might know that you can get a
very bad sickness which is called diabetes from lollies. They have lots of
sugar and other things that can make you get diabetes. Diabetes is a lifelong
disease that affects the way your body handles glucose, a kind of sugar, in
your blood.
If you are eating too many lollies you can
break or crack your shiny teeth. You might also know that it can make your
teeth rotten and they might fall out. Then one day it might be hard to eat
strong food like apples.
Now you know what happens if you eat too
much lollies. Therefore, children should never take lollies to school.
I agree with your argument! You have explained your reasons clearly and supported them with relevant details.
ReplyDeleteI agree! NO LOLLIES AT SCHOOL!
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