There was a
little boy who lived in a forest in an old house. The boy walked in the forest.
He saw a hat. He walked to where it was.
He decided
to take it home. The boy loved it. He took it to bed and when he went to bed he
saw colourful birds. When he saw it he trapped them all.
But one of
the birds escaped the cage. The boy went and looked for it. It didn’t come
back, only the normal birds. He was sad. Then he found the lost bird. He said,
“Come down I want you.” But it did not come down. So he walked home.
Well done Cruz .
ReplyDeleteREALLY! nice story just maybe make it a little bit longer if so
ReplyDeleteGood job Cruz from Harleen
DeleteNice Writing Cruz :D
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