CHARACTERS:
Danny (bro)
Aunt Larra
Whiskers (cat)
Amy (sis)
There once
was a little boy named Danny who lived with his Aunt, a cat named Whiskers, and
his sis named Amy. He couldn't talk with his Aunt because she was deaf, only
sign language worked. One day Danny took a very long walk then… he found a
hat! Danny took that hat home. It wasn't
a fancy hat; it was just red like cherries.
After
a while, when Danny left the hat in his room to go for a walk… Amy sneaked in
Danny’s room then took that hat! She was surprised what she saw; beautiful birds
flying out of the hat!
Amy
trapped the beautiful birds in cages. Then she put the cages in her room. BUT
she left the hat in Danny’s room. When Whiskers noticed she felt evil! So she
sneaked the cages outside. She unleashed some birds, then put the cages back
into Amy's room.
The
very next day Danny looked at the hat.
He felt like someone had touched the hat! THEN Danny realised something…
a finger mark of… Amy’s fingers! He knew that Amy had touched that hat! He saw
beautiful birds fly out of the hat. He wanted the birds to go!
When
Amy went in her room… she saw no birds! Danny trapped the birds right next to a
volcano! “It's
like a mouse sneaked them AND stole them!” thought Amy.
“Amy! Danny! Get your shoes on! We are going to be late!”
the old lady called. Amy knew her brother hid the birds, because he was always
stealing her stuff! So she hid the hat which made Danny sad because he thought
he had treasure. Nobody ever heard about that hat or the birds ever again. THE
END!
I love the way you have used a good simile at the start of your story. T.D
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have used a good simile at the start of your story. T.D
ReplyDeleteNice one! It's really great! From Lucy
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ReplyDeleteI did a great job!!!
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