Monday, 3 July 2017

The Black Hat

One day a creepy, small, lonely boy and his mute, tall, wise Grandmother came to the dark, muddy, wild forest.

The boy was walking around the damp, silent, windy forest when something touched him. It was a shiny, glowing, black hat. He picked up the shiny, glowing, black hat. His heart was beating hard and he was nearly getting a heart attack. His heart sounded like a person playing up and down on a trumpet.

The boy ran to his house fast as cheetah. He jumped straight into the creepy, cool bed. The next day, when he woke up he saw lots of birds, rats, monkeys and butterflies. He put the animals in the cage and the animals stayed in the cage for 3 years.

After 3 years the boy thought if I let the animals go the damp muddy forest will look beautiful and the animals will have fun. He let the animals go and he lived happily ever after.


The end 

6 comments:

  1. Really nice story

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  2. Nice story by Amneet

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  3. Nice work!
    😁

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  4. Great adjectives and I liked the way you described how he felt.

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  5. Write to be free instead of have fun.

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  6. Nice Work!
    😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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